For Angelbaby: Poems and Songs
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(05-02-2015, 07:59 AM)Sentimental Gentleman Wrote: This latest poem of yours is, at this point, your magnum opus I think. Such subtlety, such imagination, such a delicate penetration to the heart of nature's secrets (secrets I'm sure Rainbow Dash is intimately familiar with herself). I think Dante and Blake would be proud to read such a heartfelt love poem. Your style is definitely evolving and improving, it seems. I really love reading all your poetry, but this one really struck me as a standout. "And downpours precise..." what a perfect line and a perfect image to express something so inexpressible and yet so essential!

What does Rainbow think of it? I presume you shared it with her.
I hardly think I deserve all those compliments, but thank you all the same. ^^

I wrote it after she left to go pick up Scoots today. I try to reign in the "mushy" when she's with her adoptive little sister, but I plan to share it with her when she returns later tonight. x )
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RE: For Angelbaby: Poems and Songs - by Lurker - 04-22-2015, 06:32 AM
RE: For Angelbaby: Poems and Songs - by D.Va - 04-26-2015, 06:12 PM
RE: For Angelbaby: Poems and Songs - by Ziggy and Angelbaby - 05-02-2015, 08:37 AM
RE: For Angelbaby: Poems and Songs - by Sour Soul - 08-26-2015, 07:25 AM
RE: For Angelbaby: Poems and Songs - by Kadae - 12-20-2015, 07:37 PM
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